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Tuesday, November 27, 2012

Letter Writing Assignment

As an assignment for my media class, we were encouraged to write a persuasive letter to someone related to the media industry about something we are passionate about. I decided to write to Carl's Jr. about their overly sexual and disgusting commercials. Here is my letter:


Carl’s Jr. Representative,           

My name is Nicole Prentice and I am a senior at Brigham Young University majoring in Family Life with a Human Development emphasis. Several of my classes have encouraged me to be more aware of the media that I listen to, view, or experience in some other way. I will be graduating in December and feel that as a more educated consumer of the media, I need to be more critical of what I see and take a stand when I feel that it is necessary.

I do enjoy eating out at fast food restaurants on occasion. I am one of those people who like to try new menu items at least once to see how they are and if they were a good addition or not. I look to commercials to find out about the new items, but recently I have been very disappointed with the commercials from your company.

I know that sex sells, but each time I see one of your commercials that sexualizes women (or men), it sickens me and instead of encouraging me to try the new menu item, it causes me to think of your company as demeaning to women. The most recent commercial that I can think of that fits this description is the commercial with the two scantily-clad women grilling who put pulled pork on a hamburger. Honestly, the sandwich does sound good to me, but the commercial is so degrading and disgusting that I refuse to buy the meal because I do not want to support such advertising.

I have noticed in the past that many of your commercials have been similar to this, and so I honestly cannot remember the last time I chose to support your company and eat at one of your establishments. I have even encouraged my friends and family members to avoid eating at your restaurants because of your advertisements. I find this to be sad because I do enjoy the food that you serve, but I cannot with good conscience give money to a company who so disturbingly degrades and sexualizes women. I have compared your advertisements to those of other leading fast food chains, and while most do have some sexualization of women, none compare to yours in how graphic it is and in how much it repulses me.

Social learning theory tells us that everyone, and especially children, learn from what they view in the environment and they try to change their lives to fit in with what they perceive to be the accepted way of life. So many young girls watch television and instead of seeing positive portrayals of women that teach them to get an education and stand up for themselves, they often see sexualized portrayals that convince them that in order to be liked or be successful, they need to wear provocative clothing and chase after the men who are attracted to such distasteful behavior and clothing.

As a daughter, granddaughter, niece, sister, and expecting mother, I am very disturbed to see that the commercials you choose to air do not focus on the food, but instead often perpetuate the portrayal of women as objects of desire. I am writing to ask you to please clean up the advertisements that you use so that you are not helping to expand the stereotypes that young girls often believe and live up to. I know that I would be much more likely to buy your food and recommend your food to my family and friends if you chose to have positive portrayals of men and women in your ads.

Instead of only focusing on the men who buy your food, think of all of the men, women, and young children who are viewing these ads and whose ideas about women are altered by watching them. I know that you could tap into a larger market of family purchasers if you changed your commercials and made them more tasteful. Thank you for your time.

Sincerely,


Nicole Prentice

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